Can you talk about a person who has influenced your life?

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Here are my corrections for you:

I have been influenced to many people like a teacher, boss in a company, friends etc.

>> I have been influenced by many people like a teacher, a boss in a company, or friends etc.

When I was soldiers in a air-force, my job was supporting pilots.

>> When I was a soldier in the air force, my job was supporting pilots.

So I met many pilots and I saw their life everyday.

>> CORRECT!

They were very hard working and their attitude of their\'s life influence to me.

>> They were very hardworking and their attitude in their life influenced me.

So I have also hard working like them.

>> So I also work hard like them.