Can you talk about a person who has influenced your life?

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Here are my corrections for you:

Michelle Obama has influenced me the most. 

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She is well known as the wife of former U.S. President Barack Obama.

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First, she was an elite student enough to graduate from Harvard Law School, and despite discrimination against blacks, she overwhelmed everything with her outstanding ability. 

>> First, she was an elite student to graduate from Harvard Law School and despite discrimination against blacks, she overwhelmed everyone with her outstanding ability. 

I want to develop my skills and become a person who can prove my value with outstanding ability against any discrimination that I will encounter in my life.

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Second, Michelle Obama wrote an autobiography called \"Becoming\" and she is now inspiring many people including me. 

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Actually, this is a book that made me set Michelle Obama as my role model. 

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I always wanted to write an autobiography someday. 

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I have a big dream I hope the story of my life can inspire many people.

>> I have a big dream and I hope the story of my life can inspire many people.

 And it was Michelle Obama who achieved these dreams, so I want to follow her.

>> It was Michelle Obama who achieved these dreams, so I want to follow her.