Can you talk about a person who has influenced your life?
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Hello Rana!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
I am influenced by IU, who is a famous singer in Korea
>> I am influenced by IU, who is a famous singer in Korea.
and a good influencer to me because she is a good model for helping people in need.
>> She is a good influencer for me because she is a good model in helping people in need.
Her life encouraged me to sing a song and she gave me the dream to be a good influencer like her.
>> CORRECT!
I want to be a singer like IU and a good influencer to help people in need.
>> I want to be a singer like IU and a good influencer as well and help people in need.
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