Can you talk about the things you want to do in the next twelve months? Answer in 5 sentences or mor
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I want to get a good grade in next twelve months. Because I little bit disappointed about the test. so I want to be better
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Hi [이름]!
You really have the potential to be great in your studies.
Work harder and you can do anything.
I know you can achieve your dream and do well in school.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I want to get a good grade in next twelve months. >> I want to get good grades for the next twelve months.
Because I little bit disappointed about the test. so I want to be better
>> This is because I was a little disappointed about the test so I want to do better.
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