Can you talk about three of your favorite things to eat?
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Hello Christine!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
First of all, I love to eat Korean native cattle.
>> CORRECT!
I can\'t live without eating meet, especially cattle. I enjoy grill it and eat it with various vegetables.
>> I can\'t live without eating meat, especially cattle. I enjoy grilling it and eating it with various vegetables.
I feel getting stronger and healthier after taking that things.
>> I feel stronger and healthier after eating it.
I also love blueberries. I always grind them with apples, bananas, almond and walnut every morning and drink it all at once.
>> I also love blueberries. I always grind them with apples, bananas, almond, and walnut every morning then I drink it all at once.
Lastly, I like to eat Indian curries but I feel frustrated recently because after I started tooth correction, I can\'t enjoy curries.
>> Lastly, I like to eat Indian curries but I feel frustrated recently because after I started my tooth correction, I can\'t enjoy curries.
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