Can you talk about three of your favorite things to eat?

2021-07-20 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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First of all, I love to eat Korean native cattle. I can\'t live without eating meet, especially cattle. I enjoy grill it and eat it with various vegetables. I feel getting stronger and healthier after taking that things. I also love blueberries. I always grind them with apples, bananas, almond and walnut every morning and drink it all at once. Lastly, I like to eat Indian curries but I feel frustrated recently because after I started tooth correction, I can\'t enjoy curries.

강사 첨삭

Hello Christine!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


First of all, I love to eat Korean native cattle.

>> CORRECT!

I can\'t live without eating meet, especially cattle. I enjoy grill it and eat it with various vegetables.

>> I can\'t live without eating meat, especially cattle. I enjoy grilling it and eating it with various vegetables.
I feel getting stronger and healthier after taking that things.

>> I feel stronger and healthier after eating it.
I also love blueberries. I always grind them with apples, bananas, almond and walnut every morning and drink it all at once.

>> I also love blueberries. I always grind them with apples, bananas, almond, and walnut every morning then I drink it all at once.
Lastly, I like to eat Indian curries but I feel frustrated recently because after I started tooth correction, I can\'t enjoy curries.

>> Lastly, I like to eat Indian curries but I feel frustrated recently because after I started my tooth correction, I can\'t enjoy curries.

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