Can you talk about three things that scare you?
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I\'d love to talk about things that make me scared. First, my strength that I can feel is more worse as time goes on. I always think about working out, but it\'s not gonna happen. :) Second, sometimes I see white hair when I see my mom\'s hair and my dad\'s hair, also he doesn\'t have much hair. It means that a lot of time went. On top of that, it seems that they will die someday. Last one is if I won\'t leave South Korea. I\'m pretty sure it doesn\'t need to tell.
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Amazing Tuesday to you, Elic! You are an excellent student who always comes prepared for class. You are a joy to have in class. So far, you have made a great progress, and I’m excited to see what comes next. I am rooting for you.
I\'d love to talk about things that make me scared.
>> I\'d like to talk about the things that scares me.
First, my strength that I can feel is more worse as time goes on.
>> First of all, I am afraid of my body strength. As time goes by, I can feel that my body is getting weak.
I always think about working out, but it\'s not gonna happen.
>> I always think of going to the gym but it never happened.
Second, sometimes I see white hair when I see my mom\'s hair and my dad\'s hair, also he doesn\'t have much hair. It means that a lot of time went.
>> Secondly, it makes me sad whenever I see my mom and dad\'s gray hair. It just means that they are already getting old.
On top of that, it seems that they will die someday
>> Furthermore, it seems that they will die sooner or later.
Last one is if I won\'t leave South Korea. I\'m pretty sure it doesn\'t need to tell.
>> Last but not the least, I am afraid not to leave Korea as soon as possible.
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