Can you talk about three things you like about yourself?
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Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
I didn\'t like to listen to music, but now I love it.
>> I didn\'t like to listen to music before, but now I love it.
because I always go out with my friends and hang out with them, so I didn\'t have any time to listen to music before.
>> It\'s because I always go out with my friends and hang out with them, so I didn\'t have any time to listen to music before.
however, nowadays I stay alone because of COVID-19, so I like listening to music on my time.
>> However, nowadays, I stay home alone because of COVID-19, so I like listening to music on my free time.
Also, I love doing exercise.
>> CORRECT!
I\'m good at sports anything since I was young.
>> I\'m good at any sports since I was young.
Finally, I like reading books. reading something makes me comfortable.
>> Finally, I like reading books. reading something makes me feel comfortable.
It feels relax like resting.
>> It feels relaxing like resting.
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