Can you talk about three things you like about yourself?

2021-01-08 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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I didn\'t like to listen to music, but now I love it. because I always go out with my friends and hang out with them, so I didn\'t have any time to listen to music before. however, nowadays I stay alone because of COVID-19, so I like listening to music on my time. Also, I love doing exercise. I\'m good at sports anything since I was young. Finally, I like reading books. reading something makes me comfortable. It feels relax like resting.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I didn\'t like to listen to music, but now I love it. 

>> I didn\'t like to listen to music before, but now I love it. 

because I always go out with my friends and hang out with them, so I didn\'t have any time to listen to music before. 

>> It\'s because I always go out with my friends and hang out with them, so I didn\'t have any time to listen to music before. 

however, nowadays I stay alone because of COVID-19, so I like listening to music on my time.

>> However, nowadays, I stay home alone because of COVID-19, so I like listening to music on my free time.

Also, I love doing exercise. 

>> CORRECT!

I\'m good at sports anything since I was young.

>> I\'m good at any sports since I was young.
Finally, I like reading books. reading something makes me comfortable. 

>> Finally, I like reading books. reading something makes me feel comfortable. 

It feels relax like resting.

>> It feels relaxing like resting.

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