Can you talk about three things you like about yourself?(ANSWER)

2018-11-08 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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I like my positive look and and active figure. Because I am positive so I can slove difficult things even if I have to. And I am so active that I'm sctive in any task. Also I like to hang out with my friends. So I make my friends easily. This is my three things I like about myself. Thank you for reading! By. [이름]

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

Can you talk about three things you like about yourself? Please answer in complete sentences.

 

YOUR ANSWER:

I like my positive look and and active figure.
Because I am positive so I can slove difficult things even if I have to.
And I am so active that I\'m sctive in any task.
Also I like to hang out with my friends.
So I make my friends easily.
This is my three things I like about myself.

 

CORRECTIONS:

I like my positive outlook in life and active figure.
Because I am
a positive person, I can solve difficult things if I have to.
Also, I am so active in any task.
Furthermore, I like to hang out with my friends.
I
can make friends easily.
These are the three things I like about myself.

 

 

 ** Dear [이름], please take note of the corrections. J Thank you. ^^

 

Speak with you tomorrow. J

 

   ---------T. Alexia----------

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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