Can you talk about three things you want to do in the next twelve months?

2015-01-12 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I am planning to take a TOEFL and a GMAT class to take both tests this September. I’ve been searching for more information about whether there are on-line courses available and the course fees. There seems to be many on-line classes for TOEFL with affordable price, but the GMAT class is mostly offered offline, which make me difficult to take due to the long distance between my office and the language institute. Also the relatively high cost for GMAT is worrisome. Due to time, money, and energy that I have to put in to enroll in both classes, I have not made up my mind yet. My second goal this year is to seek an opportunity to change my job. I have been working for the same business too long and I feel like that I am stuck without moving ahead in terms of career development.I need to challenge other jobs. If we are working in the same job and the same position too long, it might keep you from having a diverse and broader view. You might fall into the mannerism, killing your creativity.

강사 첨삭

I hope that you\'ll be able to reach your goals this year.

There are a lot of things to consider when we take online or offline classes.

So, I want to say thank you for being with me in learning English.

I agree with your ideas stated below.

However, it is still the person\'s choice to stay or work for the same company for a long time.

Maybe, it\'s about being loyal and happy. What do you think? Hihihi.

Talk to you soon.

Teacher Nina


I am planning to take a TOEFL and a GMAT class to take both tests this September.

>> correct

>> OR: I am planning to take a TOEFL and a GMAT class as a preparation for the tests this September.

I’ve been searching for more information about whether there are on-line courses available and the course fees.

>> correct

There seems to be many on-line classes for TOEFL with affordable price, but the GMAT class is mostly offered offline, which make me difficult to take due to the long distance between my office and the language institute.

>> There seems to be many online classes for TOEFL with affordable price, but GMAT class is mostly offered offline, which makes me difficult to take due to the long distance between my office and the language institute.

>> There seems to be many online classes for TOEFL with affordable price. But GMAT class is mostly offered offline, which would be difficult for me to take due to the long distance between my office and the language institute.

Also the relatively high cost for GMAT is worrisome.

>> correct

>> The expensive cost for GMAT makes me worried.

Due to time, money, and energy that I have to put in to enroll in both classes, I have not made up my mind yet.

>> correct

My second goal this year is to seek an opportunity to change my job.

>> correct

I have been working for the same business too long and I feel like that I am stuck without moving ahead in terms of career development.

>> correct

>> I have been working for the same business for a long time now and I feel that I am moving ahead in terms of career development.

I need to challenge other jobs.

>> correct

If we are working in the same job and the same position too long, it might keep you from having a diverse and broader view.

>> correct

You might fall into the mannerism, killing your creativity.

>> correct

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