Can you talk about two things you need to do every day?(ANSWER)

2019-02-01 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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1. Drinking water I think I have to drink much water in a day. We have to drink almost 2L a day. So I think I have to drink so much water a day. 2. Eat three meals(breakfast, lunch, dinner)a day. I think breakfast is the most important. When we eat breakfast, our body balance will be always good. And we have to eat lunch and dinner at right time. Eating dinner too late is not good. So, I think drinking water, and eating three meals a day is the two things that I need to do everyday.

강사 첨삭

 

Hi [이름],

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

Can you talk about two things you need to do every day?

Please answer in complete sentences.

 

YOUR ANSWER:

1. Drinking water
I think I have to drink much water in a day.
We have to drink almost 2L a day.
So I think I have to drink so much water a day.

2. Eat three meals(breakfast, lunch, dinner)a day.
I think breakfast is the most important.
When we eat breakfast, our body balance will be always good. And we have to eat lunch and dinner at right time. Eating dinner too late is not good.

So, I think drinking water, and eating three meals a day is the two things that I need to do everyday.

 

CORRECTIONS:

1.    Drinking water
I think I have to drink much water in a day.
We have to drink almost 2L a day.
So
, I think I have to do such.

2. Eat three meals (breakfast, lunch, dinner) a day.
I think breakfast is the most important.
When we eat breakfast, our body balance will always
be good. And we have to eat lunch and dinner at the right time. Eating dinner too late is not good.

So, I think drinking water, and eating three meals a day
are the two things that I need to do every day.

 


** Dear [이름], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. J  Please take note of the corrections. ^^

 Cheers!! Take care. J

 

  ---------T. Alexia----------    

                       

           

                         

                         

           

             

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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