Can you talk about what a typical day at your current job is like?
학생이 쓴 원문
I go to work util 8:30 AM. And my team have a meeting for their`s last work. After having meeting, I usually do daily check for our facilities. If we get a message that our facilities have a malfunction, we go to fix it.
And we also make a documents about facilities for maintenance. whenever friday or the end of month, we write a some reports about our maintenance results.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]!
It\'s really nice to learn about the things you do at work. I think you have an interesting job.
It\'s really nice to learn about the things you do at work. I think you have an interesting job.
Please remember that we use the preposition \"at\" for time, example: at 8:30 a.m.
Overall, you did well.
Thank you and see you in class!
- T.Rina
1. I go to work util 8:30 AM.
>> I go to work at 8:30 a.m.
2. And my team have a meeting for their`s last work.
>> And my team has a meeting for their last work.
3. After having meeting, I usually do daily check for our facilities.
>> After having the meeting, I usually do daily check for our facilities.
OR: After the meeting, I usually check our facilities.
4. If we get a message that our facilities have a malfunction, we go to fix it.
>> If we get a message that our facilities have malfunction, we go and fix it.
>> If we get a message that our facilities have malfunction, we go and fix it.
5. And we also make a documents about facilities for maintenance.
>> And we also make documents about facilities for maintenance.
6. whenever friday or the end of month, we write a some reports about our maintenance results.
>> Whenever it\'s Friday or the end of the month, we write some reports about our maintenance results.
OR: During Fridays or the end of the month, we write some reports about the maintenance results.
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