Can you tell about a time when you were excited? Explain your answer.
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Can you tell about a time when you were excited? Explain your answer.
I went to surf to the East sea near the North province of South Korea, recently.
It was my first time to surf in my life. At first, it was difficult to learn how to sit and stand up on the surfboard, I was little scared of surfing.
It can be dangerous getting lost the center on the board as if fall off the board.
It was really scared but I tried to surf as I learned.
It was really excited when I got on the surfboard for the first time on the waves.
I couldn’t forget that feeling. It was amazing.
I fall down many times and I almost fought the waves, but I enjoyed it. It was really nice and excited.
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I went to surf to the East sea near the North province of South Korea, recently.
>> I went surfing at the East sea near the North province of South Korea, recently.
>> I went surfing at the East sea near the North province of South Korea, recently.
It was my first time to surf in my life.
>> It was first time surfing in my entire life!
At first, it was difficult to learn how to sit and stand up on the surfboard, I was little scared of surfing.
>> It was difficult learning how to sit and stand up on the surfboard at first, I was a little scared of surfing.
>> It was difficult learning how to sit and stand up on the surfboard at first, I was a little scared of surfing.
It can be dangerous getting lost the center on the board as if fall off the board.
>> It can be dangerous if you were caught off balance and get knocked down.
>> It can be dangerous if you were caught off balance and get knocked down.
It was really scared but I tried to surf as I learned.
>> It was really scary but I still tried learning how to surf.
>> It was really scary but I still tried learning how to surf.
It was really excited when I got on the surfboard for the first time on the waves.
>> It was really exciting when I got on the surfboard for the first time on the waves.
>> It was really exciting when I got on the surfboard for the first time on the waves.
I couldn’t forget that feeling.
>> CORRECT
It was amazing.
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
I fall down many times and I almost fought the waves, but I enjoyed it.
>> I fell down many times and I almost fought the waves, but I enjoyed it.
It was really nice and excited.
>> It was really nice and exciting.
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