Can you tell me about an unforgettable thing that you have seen? What made it unforgettable?
학생이 쓴 원문
I can\'t forget seeing my younger brother who went to the army on vacation to com back home without telling anyone in his family as a surprise.
Because it was the most recent thing I experienced and I was so surprised that I couldn\'t forget it.
My younger brother went on vacation without telling me to surprise our family, but when he came back home, I was so surprised that I collapsed on the spot and cried a lot. Now I remember that day with a smile, but I was so shocked and it was the first time I experienced that, so it was more memorable.
강사 첨삭
Hi!
Thank you for sharing this experience with me.
I could only imagine the surprise you have felt, and I think it was really heartwarming since it is about your family.
I believe that it is also a memorable experience for your brother. That was so lovely. ^^
~ Teacher Gina
I can\'t forget seeing my younger brother who went to the army on vacation to com back home without telling anyone in his family as a surprise.
>> I can\'t forget the moment my younger brother, who was in the army, came home on vacation without telling anyone as a surprise.
Because it was the most recent thing I experienced and I was so surprised that I couldn\'t forget it.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: It was such a recent and surprising experience that I can’t forget it.
My younger brother went on vacation without telling me to surprise our family, but when he came back home, I was so surprised that I collapsed on the spot and cried a lot.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: My younger brother went on vacation without telling me to surprise our family, and when he came home, I was so shocked that I collapsed and cried a lot.
Now I remember that day with a smile, but I was so shocked and it was the first time I experienced that, so it was more memorable.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Now I remember that day with a smile, but at the time, I was so shocked- it was my first time experiencing something like that, which made it even more memorable.
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