Can you tell me about something you regret?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes! I want to talk to you one episode about my university life.
It\'s about my dream and passion.
My university major is \'Film making\'. My dream was movie director so I go that major.
Actually the entrance examination was so diffiscult that I was study movies harder than math.
And finally I enter the movie art university.
I always looking foward to making movies on myself of directer.
But, it was different from what I thought.
There were so many genius and they had immovable comfidence and impressive communication skills.
I was lose my confidence immediately.
So I didn\'t make a movie even though I had a chance.
I graduated as a producer, not a directer.
After graduated, It is harder to make a movie than when I was a student.
It was almost impossible.
That is my regret thing, so always have a craving for it.
강사 첨삭
Aww, I appreciate you sharing your regret with me, [이름]. I understand that being surrounded by people who seem to do better than us can really bring our self-esteem down. :( Sending virtual hugs!! <3 However, I believe that things happen for a reason, and there are much better things waiting for you. ^_^ Fighting, [이름]!
~T.Harmony <3
>> Yes! I want to share with you a moment that happened during my time in the university.
It\'s about my dream and passion.
It\'s about my dream and passion.
>> CORRECT!
My university major is \'Film making\'.
My university major is \'Film making\'.
>> CORRECT!
My dream was movie director so I go that major.
>> My dream was to become a movie director someday, so I chose that major.
Actually the entrance examination was so diffiscult that I was study movies harder than math.
Actually the entrance examination was so diffiscult that I was study movies harder than math.
>> To be honest, the entrance examination was so difficult that I was studying movies a lot harder than math.
And finally I enter the movie art university.
And finally I enter the movie art university.
>> I was finally accepted into a movie and art university.
I always looking foward to making movies on myself of directer.
I always looking foward to making movies on myself of directer.
>> I always looked forward to making movies about myself as a director.
But, it was different from what I thought.
But, it was different from what I thought.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> However, it was far from what I expected it to be.
There were so many genius and they had immovable comfidence and impressive communication skills.
There were so many genius and they had immovable comfidence and impressive communication skills.
>> A lot of them were geniuses, had immovable confidence, and impressive communication skills.
I was lose my confidence immediately.
I was lose my confidence immediately.
>> I instantly lost confidence in myself.
OR>> I felt inferior.
OR>> My self-esteem sunk.
So I didn\'t make a movie even though I had a chance.
So I didn\'t make a movie even though I had a chance.
>> Despite the opportunity to make a movie, I never did it.
I graduated as a producer, not a directer.
I graduated as a producer, not a directer.
>> CORRECT! (Just change the spelling of \"directer\" to \"director\" ^^)
After graduated, It is harder to make a movie than when I was a student.
>> After graduation, it was a lot harder to make a movie compared to when I was a student.
It was almost impossible.
It was almost impossible.
>> CORRECT!
That is my regret thing, so always have a craving for it.
That is my regret thing, so always have a craving for it.
>> That is my regret in life, so I always have a desire to do it.
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