Can you tell me about something you would happily do again?

Last winter, I went to go skating with my boyfriend. It has been a long time. I think that the last time I enjoyed skating was about 15 years ago. When I was an elementary student, I often went to skating link nearby my house. Unfortunately, the link was disappeared because of its bankrupcy. I was very upset about it. After that I wanted to go skating many times but it did not come true with many reasons. However, I finally could go skating and enjoy it. Even though I skated just for an hour, It gave me a good memory. Especially, since my boyfriend has never gone skating in his life, we could be more exited and interested by leading and pulling each other. In addition, the price was very cheap; it costed just 1,000 won for an hour. Some day, if I have an opportunity to go skating this year, I want to go their again with my boyfriend.

Good afternoon Miss [이름]! Thank you for your homework. Please go over my corrections. ~Kelly^^ Last winter, I went to go skating with my boyfriend. >> Last winter, I went skating with my boyfriend. It has been a long time. >> Correct. I think that the last time I enjoyed skating was about 15 years ago. >> Correct.  When I was an elementary student, I often went to skating link nearby my house. >> When I was an elementary student, I often went to a skating rink nearby my house. Unfortunately, the link was disappeared because of its bankrupcy. >> Unfortunately, the rink closed because of bankrupcy. I was very upset about it. >> Correct.  After that I wanted to go skating many times but it did not come true with many reasons. >> After that, I wanted to go skating many times but it did not come true due to many reasons.However, I finally could go skating and enjoy it. >> Until finally, I could go skating again and enjoyed it. Even though I skated just for an hour, It gave me a good memory. >> Even though I skated for just an hour, it left me a good memory. Especially, since my boyfriend has never gone skating in his life, we could be more exited and interested by leading and pulling each other. >> Especially, since my boyfriend has never gone skating in his life, it could be more exciting and interesting leading and pulling each other. In addition, the price was very cheap; it costed just 1,000 won for an hour. >> Correct.  Some day, if I have an opportunity to go skating this year, I want to go their again with my boyfriend. >> If I have an opportunity to go skating this year, I want to go there again with my boyfriend.