Can you tell me about something you would happily do again? And why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I feel calm when I listen to music with earphones.
And if I eat sweet foods like chocolates, macarons and candies, I feel happy again.
Or I feel good when I go to karaoke or shopping with my friends.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! :)
And if I eat sweet foods like chocolates, macarons and candies, I feel happy again.
Or I feel good when I go to karaoke or shopping with my friends.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
I feel calm when I listen to music with earphones.
>> CORRECT!
And if I eat sweet foods like chocolates, macarons and candies, I feel happy again.
>> And if I eat sweet food like chocolates, macaroons and candies, I feel happy again.
Or I feel good when I go to karaoke or shopping with my friends.
>> CORRECT!
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