Can you tell me about the hardest thing you ever had to do?

2020-01-13 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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The hardest thing I ever had to do was an Extreme Challenge in a retreat. It is crossing bridge on a high place. I have acrophobia so I was very scared. While I was crossing bridge, my legs were trembling so much.

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Hello [이름]! :)

Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)

- Tricia

The hardest thing I ever had to do was an Extreme Challenge in a retreat.
>> CORRECT!

It is crossing bridge on a high place.
>> It was about crossing a bridge in a high place.

I have acrophobia so I was very scared.
>> CORRECT!

While I was crossing bridge, my legs were trembling so much.
>> CORRECT!

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