Can you tell me about the most important lesson you\\\'ve learned in life so far?
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Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. [이름]tina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
I learned truth power in my life since 35 years.
>> I learned the power of truth in the 35 years of my life.
Someday lies will be discovered.
>> Someday, the lies will be discovered.
and I learned that real happiness in our life. not money.
>> I learned that is the real happiness in our lives, not money.
Real happiness is mean health and have a great time with friendly people and family.
>> Real happiness means good health and having a great time with friendly people and family.
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