Can you tell me about the most important lesson you\\\'ve learned in life so far?

2021-01-19 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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I learned truth power in my life since 35 years. Someday lies will be discovered. and I learned that real happiness in our life. not money. Real happiness is mean health and have a great time with friendly people and family.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. [이름]tina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I learned truth power in my life since 35 years.

>> I learned the power of truth in the 35 years of my life.
Someday lies will be discovered.

>> Someday, the lies will be discovered.
and I learned that real happiness in our life. not money.
>> I learned that is the real happiness in our lives, not money.
Real happiness is mean health and have a great time with friendly people and family.

>> Real happiness means good health and having a great time with friendly people and family.




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