Can you tell me about the most important lesson you\'ve learnt in life so far?

2020-01-16 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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I saw an animation in kindergarten when I was 6 years old. I can\'t remember the details of the animation. But it was an animation that taught us not to judge by appearances. And I\'m still trying to keep that lesson.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! :)

Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)

- Tricia

I saw an animation in kindergarten when I was 6 years old.
>> I saw an animation when I was in the kindergarten.

I can\'t remember the details of the animation.
>> CORRECT!

But it was an animation that taught us not to judge by appearances.
>> CORRECT!

And I\'m still trying to keep that lesson.
>> CORRECT!

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