Can you tell me about the person who is always with you and what do you guys do?
학생이 쓴 원문
My husband is the one who is always with me most of the time.
We like to make a conversation while watching TV, movies, Netflix and also eating delicous foods together.
During the weekends, we sometimes go out and take some fresh air by going on a trip to the near place where it is nice to relax like fishing on the lake.
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We like to make a conversation while watching TV, movies, Netflix and also eating delicous foods together.
During the weekends, we sometimes go out and take some fresh air by going on a trip to the near place where it is nice to relax like fishing on the lake.
My husband is the one who is always with me most of the time.
>> CORRECT
We like to make a conversation while watching TV, movies, Netflix and also eating delicous foods together.
>> We like making conversations while watching TV, movies while eating delicious food together.
During the weekends, we sometimes go out and take some fresh air by going on a trip to the near place where it is nice to relax like fishing on the lake.
>>CORRECT
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