Can you tell me about the worst punishment you had when you were a child?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was 8 years old, I was chattering with my friend.
My teacher got angry with us, and she said that no one should talk to me.
No one talked to me because my friends were afraid of getting scolded by my teacher.
And I felt left out.
If this situation comes to me, I will change the position of the noisy student.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! :)
My teacher got angry with us, and she said that no one should talk to me.
No one talked to me because my friends were afraid of getting scolded by my teacher.
And I felt left out.
If this situation comes to me, I will change the position of the noisy student.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
When I was 8 years old, I was chattering with my friend.
>> CORRECT!
My teacher got angry with us, and she said that no one should talk to me.
>> CORRECT!
No one talked to me because my friends were afraid of getting scolded by my teacher.
>> CORRECT!
And I felt left out.
>> CORRECT!
If this situation comes to me, I will change the position of the noisy student.
>> If this situation happens to me again, I will change the sitting arrangement of the noisy student.
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