Can you tell me your hardest things you ever had to do?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name].
I was looking for your profile. There was no business english in your subject of the lesson.
As I said my situation, I want to take a lesson about Business.
3 years ago, I decided to leave the company. It was very difficult decision.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]. Thank you for doing your homework. You did great. Keep up the good work. Teacher Tricia is absent today so I will be checking your homework for today. See you later in class. - T. Jasper
Here are your corrections:
>> Dear [Name],
>> I was looking at your profile and there was no business English in your subjects of lesson.
>> As I mentioned, I want to take a lesson about business.
>> CORRECT
It was very difficult decision
>> It was a very difficult decision.
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