Can you think of a time when your morale was very high? What happened?

2025-08-29 · 첨삭 강사 Ryka

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When I prepared CPA test, I joined academy to learn a accounting. That was first day, I went to academy building and that was too crowed. They were all my rivals. I made for myself a promise that I will pass the test.

강사 첨삭

Hello! I\'m so glad you made the effort to finish the homework. You did an outstanding job expressing your thoughts—keep up the excellent work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^


When I prepared CPA test, I joined academy to learn a accounting.
When I was preparing for the CPA test, I joined an academy to learn accounting.

That was first day, I went to academy building and that was too crowed.
On the first day, I went to the academy building, and it was too crowded. 

They were all my rivals.
Everyone there was my rival.

I made for myself a promise that I will pass the test.
I made a promise to myself that I would pass the test.

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