Can you think of activities that make one season better than another? Answer in 5 sentences or more.
학생이 쓴 원문
Swimming in Summer. Because when you feel hot if you go in to the water you feel awesome. It's good combination
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
This does sound good.
It\'s always relaxing to think of things like this.
Continue sharing your ideas.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Swimming in Summer. >> I think swimming during summer is the best thing.
Because when you feel hot if you go in to the water you feel awesome.
>> That\'s because you would feel awesome when it\'s hot and you go into the water.
It\'s good combination
>> It\'s really a good combination.
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