Can you think of any advantages of using public transport as opposed to using your own vehicle, walk
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The advantage of using own vehicle have more cheaper than public transport\'s oil cost. and own vehicle don\'t feel a traffic jam. There is a traffic jam getting on and off work time. So, it is not be late arrived place. For the convenient is a public transport, however, if it is important think about our time, that good to using own vehicle. also, walking or cycling is a good for health.
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The advantage of using own vehicle have more cheaper than public transport\'s oil cost.
>>> The advantage of using public transport as opposed to using one\'s own vehicle is cheaper when it comes to oil cost.
and own vehicle don\'t feel a traffic jam.
>>> We will not feel the inconveniences of being in a traffic jam.
There is a traffic jam getting on and off work time.
>>> There is always a traffic jam getting to and off work.
So, it is not be late arrived place.
>>> In order to arrive on time.
For the convenient is a public transport, however, if it is important think about our time, that good to using own vehicle.
>>> It is more convenient to use public transport. However, we have to manage our time well as opposed to using our own vehicle.
also, walking or cycling is a good for health.
>>> Also, walking or cycling is good for our health.
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