Can you think of any cases where stress can be useful or even necessary?
학생이 쓴 원문
People who aren\\\'t suffer from stress at all can\\\'t exist and a certain level of stress is normal.
Sometimes stress is useful for our life and the examples are as below.
Under the stress means that we are maintaining tension.
Tension makes us react quickly so it could be helpful when we should finish important projects in the short time or we are in danger.
Also, stress for the future could be a motivation for a self-improvement.
But if stress happens too often and lasts too long, it can have bad effects on your health like a headache, stomachache , trouble in sleeping, and so on.
So finding effective ways for you to relive stress is important and essential.
Note: Dear [Name] :) I have a trouble to choose right articles when writing and speaking English. Could you explain it to me during our class or add to writing corrections?
강사 첨삭
Dear [이름],
Thank you for another homework excellently done. I only have to comment on contractions. When it comes to formal writing, we do not use contractions. As for your concern with articles, let\'s talk about it in class later. The explanation is quite extensive and I might not be able to explain it well when I just write it down. Furthermore, you could ask questions in turn if you have more concerns. I look forward to our class later. ~ teacher Jane c\",)
People who aren\\\'t suffer from stress at all can\\\'t exist and a certain level of stress is normal.
>>> People who do not suffer from stress at all cannot exist and a certain level of stress is normal.
Sometimes stress is useful for our life and the examples are as below.
>>> CORRECT =)
Under the stress means that we are maintaining tension.
>>> Being under stress means that we are maintaining tension.
Tension makes us react quickly so it could be helpful when we should finish important projects in the short time or we are in danger.
>>> Tension makes us react quickly so it could be helpful when we should finish important projects in a short time or when we are in danger.
Also, stress for the future could be a motivation for a self-improvement.
>>> Also, stress for the future could be a motivation for self-improvement.
But if stress happens too often and lasts too long, it can have bad effects on your health like a headache, stomachache , trouble in sleeping, and so on.
>>> CORRECT =)
OR>>> But if stress happens too often and lasts too long, it can have bad effects on your health like headache, stomachache, trouble in sleeping/ insomnia, and so on.
So finding effective ways for you to relive stress is important and essential.
>>> CORRECT =)
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