Can you think of some more interestingchallenges that a person can do?
학생이 쓴 원문
We can usually interested in something challenges before we didi\'t.
It depends on people and ages. But i\'ll tell you 50s to 60.70s
For example. We can enjoy working out.
Or,play the piano ; we could make a money and live with my family and we can afford it.
Now.we challenge! Time to wait for us
강사 첨삭
These actually made me think about my future too! Thank you. :)
We can usually interested in something challenges before we didi\'t.
>> We usually get interested in some challenges that we didn\'t like before.
It depends on people and ages. But i\'ll tell you 50s to 60.70s
>> It depends on people and their ages, but I\'ll tell you that it would be around 50\'s to 70\'s, we try to think about these things.
For example. We can enjoy working out.
>>For example, we enjoy working out.
Or,play the piano ; we could make a money and live with my family and we can afford it.
>> We can enjoy playing the piano too. We could make money and live with our family. The best part is that, we can afford it.
Now.we challenge! Time to wait for us
>> Now, it is a challenge for us! Let us wait.
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