Can you think of some reason why people don\'t keep dogs or cats?
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I think that dogs and cats cannot live with people. First, dogs were originally lived in nature. Also, some cats and dogs are fierce. So,they can bite people. So, I think that dogs and cats cannot live with people because of some reasons.
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I think that dogs and cats cannot live with people.
>> or: I think that dogs and cats, and people cannot live under the same roof.
First, dogs were originally lived in nature.
>> First, dogs originally lived in nature.
Also, some cats and dogs are fierce. So, they can bite people.
>> correct~~
So, I think that dogs and cats cannot live with people because of some reasons.
>> So, I think that dogs and cats cannot live with people because of the above reasons.
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