Can you think of some reason why people don\'t keep dogs or cats?
학생이 쓴 원문
I thought this topic before and I knew what are the reason why people don\'t keep dogs or cats.
I think,
first. Having dogs or cats are unaffordable for many people.
second. It\'s too expensive for pets
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I thought this topic before and I knew what are the reason why people don\'t keep dogs or cats.
>>> I have thought about this topic before and I knew the reasons why people don\'t keep dogs or cats.
I think,
first. Having dogs or cats are unaffordable for many people.
>>> First, having dogs or cats is unaffordable for many people.
second. It\'s too expensive for pets
>>> Second, it\'s too expensive to raise pets.
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