Can you think of some reason why people don\'t keep dogs or cats?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes. Because if we raise to dogs or cats, someone will abandon them. So I think they are think one more time to raise their dogs or cats.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Daisy!
Thank you for sharing your opinion with me. I think you are correct. It is also our responsibility to feed and take care of them.
~Teacher Erin
Yes. Because if we raise to dogs or cats
>>Yes, because if we raise dogs or cats,
someone will abandon them.
>>CORRECT
So I think they are think one more time to raise their dogs or cats.
>>So, I think they need to think twice before raising their dogs or cats.
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