Can you think of two things you were happy about from last year?

2014-12-30 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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As others do, I also make plans and set up objectives including resolutions when a new year begins. I usually try to have time to reflect on what I’ve achieved and how I have spent the year when it approaches to the end. In most cases, I regret that my personal goals have not been realized mainly due to the lack of my will and endeavor. This year was not an exception. The year has gone so fast and I’ve just gotten older without getting tangible results. I’m getting older and my body is not what it used to be. It is so sad and regretful that I did achieve nothing. However, If I comfort myself, my family and I have gone through the year without any big trouble such as health problems or financial difficulties. Looking at other people who have experienced terrible misfortunes, we were lucky and should appreciate what I have instead of wanting more. In business, we could survive although we failed to achieve our business objectives. It was not the best result, but not the worst, either.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir [이름]!

Thanks for doing your homework today.

I hope that you will have a wonderful time with your family tonight.

Don\'t worry about the past, look forward for the new blessings and opportunities that will come your way this coming year.

I hope that you will have a wonderful year ahead.

Genuine success comes only to those who are ready for it. So never step back and always have courage to accept new challenges. Wishing you a very happy new year 2015!!! I am looking forward to more interesting topics and classes with you.

Take care!

Teacher Nina


As others do, I also make plans and set up objectives including resolutions when a new year begins.

>> correct

>> OR: As others do, I also make plans and set up goals including resolutions when a new year starts.

I usually try to have time to reflect on what I’ve achieved and how I have spent the year when it approaches to the end.

>> correct

In most cases, I regret that my personal goals have not been realized mainly due to the lack of my will and endeavor.

>> In most cases, I regret that my personal goals have not been realized mainly due to the lack of will and endeavor.

This year was not an exception.

>> correct

The year has gone so fast and I’ve just gotten older without getting tangible results.

>> correct

I’m getting older and my body is not what it used to be.

>> correct

It is so sad and regretful that I did achieve nothing.

>> correct

However, If I comfort myself, my family and I have gone through the year without any big trouble such as health problems or financial difficulties.

>> correct

Looking at other people who have experienced terrible misfortunes, we were lucky and should appreciate what I have instead of wanting more.

>> correct

In business, we could survive although we failed to achieve our business objectives.

>> correct

It was not the best result, but not the worst, either.

>> correct

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