Can you think of two things you were happy about from last year?
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Hello Sir [이름]!
Thanks for doing your homework today.
I hope that you will have a wonderful time with your family tonight.
Don\'t worry about the past, look forward for the new blessings and opportunities that will come your way this coming year.
I hope that you will have a wonderful year ahead.
Genuine success comes only to those who are ready for it. So never step back and always have courage to accept new challenges. Wishing you a very happy new year 2015!!! I am looking forward to more interesting topics and classes with you.
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Teacher Nina
As others do, I also make plans and set up objectives including resolutions when a new year begins.
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>> OR: As others do, I also make plans and set up goals including resolutions when a new year starts.
I usually try to have time to reflect on what I’ve achieved and how I have spent the year when it approaches to the end.
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In most cases, I regret that my personal goals have not been realized mainly due to the lack of my will and endeavor.
>> In most cases, I regret that my personal goals have not been realized mainly due to the lack of will and endeavor.
This year was not an exception.
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The year has gone so fast and I’ve just gotten older without getting tangible results.
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I’m getting older and my body is not what it used to be.
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It is so sad and regretful that I did achieve nothing.
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However, If I comfort myself, my family and I have gone through the year without any big trouble such as health problems or financial difficulties.
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Looking at other people who have experienced terrible misfortunes, we were lucky and should appreciate what I have instead of wanting more.
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In business, we could survive although we failed to achieve our business objectives.
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It was not the best result, but not the worst, either.
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