Can you think of two things you were happy about from this year, 2021?
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Hello Chloe!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
First thing that it was happy is the day when the BTS concert announcement is out!!
>> First thing I was happy about was the day when the BTS concert announcement came out!!
Because I want to go to BTS concert.
>> This is because I want to go to the BTS concert.
The second thing is that I can learn acting. Because my dream is actress.
>> The second thing is that I can learn acting because my dream is to be an actress.
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