Car.
학생이 쓴 원문
It's been almost 4 years for me to join my company.
I have kept myself from buying a car since joining this company.
but nowadays I think I need a car to go to a mall or hospital.
Using public trasportaions may cost less than using my own car.
Someone must have bought a car in same situation as me.
But I have hesitated to buy it for about 1 year.
My mother always told me not to waste money when I was young.
I think it has affected my life.
Most of people whom I work with bought midsize cars.
Someone of them bought a bigger car than they can afford.
Somehow I will get a car in a couple of month.
and it will be a small car which uses less oil.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]! I noticed that you usually made ambiguous sentences. A word, phrase, or sentence is ambiguous if it has more than one meaning. Try to look at the ambiguous sentences that you made below. I hope you could improve on this aspect.
-Teacher JM
It's been almost 4 years for me to join my company.>>>It's been about 4 years since I joined my company.I have kept myself from buying a car since joining this company.>>>Correct!!but nowadays I think I need a car to go to a mall or hospital.>>>But nowadays, I think I need a car to go to a mall or hospital.Using public trasportaions may cost less than using my own car.>>>Using public transportations may cost less than using my own car.Someone must have bought a car in same situation as me. (ambiguous)>>>Others in the same situation as mine, must have bought a car by now.But I have hesitated to buy it for about 1 year. (ambiguous)>>>For about 1 year, I have hesitated to buy one.My mother always told me not to waste money when I was young. (ambiguous)>>> When I was young, My mother always told me not to waste money.I think it has affected my life.>>>Correct!!Most of people whom I work with bought midsize cars.>>>Most people whom I work with bought midsize cars.Someone of them bought a bigger car than they can afford.>>>Some of them bought bigger cars which cost more than they can afford.Somehow I will get a car in a couple of month.>>>In a couple of months, I will somehow buy a car---.and it will be a small car which uses less oil.
>>>Correct!!
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