car

2016-01-11 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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Car is a nice transportation and it is very useful. I loved ride car because its fun and really cool. My sister don't like to rise cars because she has carsick so she has to chew gums.Me and my dad Likes to ride cars. dad like t drive. We always go driving together. We ride bikes everyweekend. So me and my dad always be toghther. dad and me is a perfectpartners.

강사 첨삭

Hi MIN! Happy Monday!:)   I\'m envious of your relationship with your father(just kiding^_^). I\'m glad you both share same interests. It\'s a common thing that fathers are closer to their sons. Too bad Emma couldn\'t enjoy joyrides due to carsickness. Just like me, I get nau[이름]us when riding a bus.^_-   Thank you for this composition. See you in class!:)   ~T. Mayleen~   Car is a nice transportation and it is very useful. >> A car is a nice and useful form of transportation. I loved ride car because its fun and really cool. >> I love to ride cars because it\'s fun and really cool. My sister don\'t like to rise cars because she has carsick so she has to chew gums >> My sister doesn\'t like to ride cars because she suffering carsickness so she\'ll need to chew gums. Me and my dad Likes to ride cars. >> My dad and I like to ride cars. dad like t drive. >> My dad likes to drive. We always go driving together. >> We always drive around together. We ride bikes everyweekend. >> We ride bikes on weekends. So me and my dad always be toghther. >> My dad and I, we\'re always together dad and me is a perfectpartners. >> We have a perfect partnership.

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