car accident

Yesterday, my dad was in car accident in the cross street. I was a bit surprised but it was okay because nobody hurted.what a relief. But there is one bad thing that the car wasnot my dad's one. that's why the car insurance couldn't cover at all. Actually, the car was my brother's one. I think a car is very convenient method in life but sometimes it can be very dangerous if car accident happens.

HI MARIA^^ I\'m sorry to hear about the accident. the good thing is that nobody got hurt. It is really tru that having your own car is really convenient but we should also be careful when driving. Do you own a car?What is your dream car?Let\'s talk about it in class.Thank you for sending me a composition today.Nice job! See you! Take Care! Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: Yesterday, my dad was in car accident in the cross street. >> Yesteday,my dad had a car accident across the street,I was a bit surprised but it was okay because nobody hurted.what a relief. >> I was a bit surprised but it was okay because nobody got hurt.What a relief.But there is one bad thing that the car wasnot my dad\'s one. >> But the bad thing is that my dad doesn\'t own that car.that\'s why the car insurance couldn\'t cover at all. >> That\'s why the car insurance couldn\'t cover it all. OR >> The car insurance can\'t cover all the expenses.Actually, the car was my brother\'s one. >> Actually,the car is owned by my brother. OR >> My brother owns the car.I think a car is very convenient method in life but sometimes it can be very dangerous if car accident happens. >> I think having a car is very convenient in life but sometimes it can be dangerous if a car accident happens.