Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are

2020-05-18 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

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Yes, I agree that traffic jam is uncomfortable problem. But I think there are nothing to solve this problem that the government can.

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Hi there [이름]~! A Happy morning to you~! ^^ Thanks for doing your essays. Keep expressing yourself so you\'d improve continuously! ^^ Have a great day~! 
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Yes, I agree that traffic jam is an uncomfortable problem. 
>>> CORRECT
But I think there are nothing to solve this problem that the government can.
>>> But I think, there is nothing that the government can do to solve this problem.

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