Car that is bestselling in our country
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Hi! My name is [Name]. Today, dad and I opened a car rentplace. We found 5 cars that had a sticker on that said \"no owner\" so we drove that car and polished it. Now, it is good as new and we posted ad papers that said, \'TOP 5 CARS FOR PEOPLE WHO ARE CAR-LESS\' And that did it. Jason, Roey, Sylvia, Nathan, and Dorothea came to book a car for their parents. The cars were all 6255 dollars, actually half the price of the car\'s real price. Still, it\'s expensive. ㅠㅠ Then more and more people came. But know why. Because, actually, all of the cars were convertable cars, the most popular car in our town. Anyway, I loved our rent-event, so I hope we\'ll find more cars to sell!!
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Good day, Heather! Thank you for another wonderful story you imparted. Did you know that I like cars? I wish to have my own car in the future. I will see you in class.~ T. Lyn
Hi! My name is [Name].
>>Correct.
Today, dad and I opened a car rentplace.
>>Today, my dad and I opened a rental car shop.
We found 5 cars that had a sticker on that said \"no owner\" so we drove that car and polished it.
>>We found five cars with \"ownerless\" stickers on them, drove them and polished them up
Now, it is good as new and we posted ad papers that said, \'TOP 5 CARS FOR PEOPLE WHO ARE CAR-LESS\' And that did it.
>>Now, it\'s as good as new, and had posted an advertising article called \"Top 5 Cars for Carless People.\"
Jason, Roey, Sylvia, Nathan, and Dorothea came to book a car for their parents.
>>Jason, Roey, Sylvia, Nathanm and Dorothea come to book a car for their parents.
The cars were all 6255 dollars, actually half the price of the car\'s real price.
>>The cars were all 6,225 dollars, half of the original price.
Still, it\'s expensive. ㅠㅠ
>>Correct.
Then more and more people came.
>>Correct.
But know why.
>>I think I know why.
Because, actually, all of the cars were convertable cars, the most popular car in our town.
>>It is because every car was a convertible, the most popular car in our town.
Anyway, I loved our rent-event, so I hope we\'ll find more cars to sell!!
>>Anyway, I really liked the rental event, so I hope we can sell more vehicles!
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