career education2

Hello, my dear, Ji Yu!~

Here we are on the second part of your composition.

It was really nice knowing your stories. I always believe that

you will really be a good mentor in the future. However, don\'t

rush my dear when it comes to your career. You will always have

chances and you just have to open your mind and heart to those.

Don\'t be blinded by other things that will disturb your focus.
Enjoy living, enjoy life as well!^^

I look forward to reading your next diary!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~

She always concentrated my classes, she even come my class and asked questions.

>> She always concentrated in my classes and asked questions.
Although she got a bad grade on middle exam, she studied more and she got good grade that she wanted on final exam.

>> Although she got a bad grade during the middle exams, she studied more and got good grades that she wanted in the final exam.
Also, last year, I had a goal which is to enter to Foreign Language School.

>> Also, last year, I had a goal: to enter a Foreign Language School.
And then I had a variety of aptitude tests to make my career.

>> Correct
 Actually, I could not decide exact my whole plan.

>> Actually, I could not exactly decide on my whole plan.

I am sure that more and more exactly you think about my career, more and more I focus on study. 

>> I am sure that the more I think exactly about my career, the more I focus on my studies.
As I said before, I cold not answer my detailed plan. 

>> As I said before, I could not answer my detailed plan.
 It`s because there was the career class only once a week.

>> It is because my career class is only once a week.
Though, I always wasted of my career classes time in watching EBS TV program, Extreme Job.

>> Though, I always wasted my career classes time watching EBS TV program entitled \"Extreme Job\".
That meant many classes in middle school progressed in wrong ways.

>> Correct
 So I think we need more chances to disscuss about our career.

>> Correct