carolyn and I had marvelous weekend.

2014-01-20 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1. She is __ girl! such a clever 2. It was ___ last night that I couldn't sleep. so hot 3. $500 a night for a hotel? That's ___! so expensive 4. He was ___, he could run 5 miles in 30 minutes. such a fast runner 5. The train was ___, it went from Shanghai to Beijing in only 10 hours. so fast 6. The ocean in Los Angeles is usually ____. so cold 7. I can't believe that John stole that woman's purse. He was always ___. such a good boy 8. This restaurant has __ of food, that it's hard to decide what to order. so selection 9. How could you say __ to your mother? such an awful thing 10. She's ___ gorgeous girl! such a Carolyn and I had marvelous weekend. First of all, we met on last thursday to eat dinner. We went to sushi restaurant which provide customer sushi complimently. We enjoyed our dinner. But the sort of sushi was not various. and then We went to hair shop. We had our hair cut. Her look was great. But she always looks great for me.

강사 첨삭

Hello! A wonderful Monday to you!
Thank you for finding some time to finish your homework.
It sounds like you had a great time with Carolyn.^^
Well, regarding your English skills, practice makes perfect. Enjoy the rest of the day!^^
_T.NINA_

1. She is __ girl!
such a clever
>> Correct!
2. It was ___ last night that I couldn\'t sleep.
so hot
>> Correct!
3. $500 a night for a hotel? That\'s ___!
so expensive
>> Correct!
4. He was ___, he could run 5 miles in 30 minutes.
such a fast runner
>> Correct!
5. The train was ___, it went from Shanghai to Beijing in only 10 hours.
so fast
>> Correct!
6. The ocean in Los Angeles is usually ____.
so cold
>> Correct!
7. I can\'t believe that John stole that woman\'s purse. He was always ___.
such a good boy
>> Correct!
8. This restaurant has __ of food, that it\'s hard to decide what to order.
so selection
>> Correct!
9. How could you say __ to your mother?
such an awful thing
>> Correct!
10. She\'s ___ gorgeous girl!
such a
>> Correct!

Carolyn and I had marvelous weekend.
>> Carolyn and I had a marvelous weekend.
First of all, we met on last thursday to eat dinner.
>> First of all, we met last Thursday to eat dinner.
We went to sushi restaurant which provide customer sushi complimently.
>> We went to a sushi restaurant which provides customer sushi as complementary dish.
We enjoyed our dinner. But the sort of sushi was not various.
>> We enjoyed our dinner. But there are no other kinds of sushi.
and then We went to hair shop. We had our hair cut.
>> After that, we went to a hair shop/barber shop/salon. We had our hair cut.
Her look was great. But she always looks great for me.
>> Her look was great. She always look great to me.^^
>> OR: She looked great, and she is always to me.

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