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As you know there are grades in sports league.

>> As you know there are scores in a sports league.
There are only few people who can get a much money.

>> There are only few people who can earn a lot of money.
Some sport star get paid milion dallor per a year.

>> Some sports star are paid a million dollar every year.
but Many athlete don\'t get much salary.

>> But many athlete don\'t earn much.
Specially team sports player, like a soccer player, theire salary is dfferent from their position.

>> Especially with a team sports player, like a soccer player, their salary is different from what a person in their position should earn.
Probably, striker who can get a goal in the game get much paid in thesedays.

>> Probably, a striker who can get a goal in the game get a higher pay these days.
In Korea, there is famous soccer player whose name is Park ji sung.

>> In Korea, there is a famous soccer player whose name is Park Ji Sung.
His nick name is Captain park.

>> correct
Captain Park was in the Manchester United which is popular in world wide.

>> Captain Park was in Manchester United which is popular worldwide. 
He get paid a lot of money for playing.

>> He gets paid for playing.

>> OR: He earns a lot of money by playing.
Now he is retired now, but He will be told as a legendary player.

>> He retired but he will be told as a legendary player.