case of epidemic desease diffusion

2012-03-12 · 첨삭 강사 Nica

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The aim of The Mcgregor's English Usage is to help to use correctively vocaburary and structure that English learners convey. The entry, based on recent meterials of language, reference that both of learner and teacher can know how to use english nowadays, is very useful. The prior aim is to indicate vocabulary and structure to use just in wrighting or just in coversation. Also it explains obviously the difference between and british english and american english. An epidemic desease has a feature to spread out throughout all population rapidly that cannot resist the high appearance and expenditure. It was one of causes of epidemic desease that explore and natives isolated from other sites has any contact. The worst epidemic desease in international history was after periodical contact between natives and european.

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Hi Sophia!! ^_^ Thank you for your composition. You did a great job. I provided you some corrections for some of your sentences. Pleae review them. See you in class!^^ __Teacher Nica__   The aim of The Mcgregor\'s English Usage is to help to use correctively vocaburary and structure that English learners convey. >> The aim of The Mcgregor\'s English Usage is to help people to use correctly vocabulary and the structure of English learners. The entry, based on recent meterials of language, reference that both of learner and teacher can know how to use english nowadays, is very useful. >> The entry, based on recent meterials of language, both learner and teacher will be taught how important the use of English is. The prior aim is to indicate vocabulary and structure to use just in wrighting or just in coversation. >> The prior aim is to teach the use of vocabulary and structure both in writing and conversation. Also it explains obviously the difference between and british english and american english. >> It also explains the difference between British and American English. An epidemic desease has a feature to spread out throughout all population rapidly that cannot resist the high appearance and expenditure. >> An epidemic disease was featured that  is about to spread rapidly through out the whole population that people can not resist. It was one of causes of epidemic desease that explore and natives isolated from other sites has any contact. >> The cause of this epidemic disease made natives isolated from contacts to other sites. The worst epidemic desease in international history was after periodical contact between natives and european. >> Correct!

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