Cat
학생이 쓴 원문
Cat
강사 첨삭
What an adorable story, Andrew! I enjoyed the happy ending, too. The more, the merrier. ^-^ In the beginning of your story, you can also add some details about your pet cat like the color of the fur or the kind of cat it is (tuxedo cat, for example). :) It was impressive of you to know that an ocelot is, since not a lot of people are aware of it. Very smart! ^^
~T.Harmony <3
>> I went to have a picnic with my cat.
It was cold outside because it was winter.
>> CORRECT!
So I wore a scarf.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> So I wore a (color) scarf to keep me warm.
I played catchball with my cat.
>> CORRECT!
It was very fun.
>> CORRECT!
My cat make a friend.
>> My cat made a friend.
The friend was a ocelot.
>> The friend was an ocelot.
(We use \"an\" if the starting letter of the next word is a vowel (a,e,i,o,u) ^^)
I picked my cat\'s friend.
>> I picked up my cat\'s new friend.
Now I have two cats!
>> CORRECT! (YAY!)
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