Catching a bad cold

2016-03-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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I catch a bad cold yesterday.Yesterday,I played socer without wearing coat in the physical education class.And it was windy day.Some of my friends didn't wear coat like me but only 1 friend catch a cold.He didn't wear coat like me.Because of bad cold I didn't get good score at science and after class I went to the hospital and ate some medicine and snacks and slept for an hour.

강사 첨삭

 

Hi [이름] ^^
Good afternoon.
Pretty bad, you are not feeling well.
Take care when you go to he hospital.
Tonight, take a rest. You need more sleep. Do not stress yourself out.
Eat plenty of food tonight and take your medicine.
I will see you then on Tuesday.
Enjoy your weekend and get well soon.

 

~ Teacher Kris

 

 

 

I catch a bad cold yesterday.

>> I caught a cold yesterday.

OR: Yesterday, I caught a cold.

Yesterday,I played socer without wearing coat in the physical education class.

>> Yesterday, when we had our Physical Education class I played soccer without wearing my coat.

And it was windy day.

>> It was a windy day.

Some of my friends didn\'t wear coat like me but only 1 friend catch a cold.

>> Some of my friends didn\'t wear their coats but only one of them caught a cold.

He didn\'t wear coat like me.

>> Like me, he also didn\'t wear his coat.

Because of bad cold I didn\'t get good score at science and after class I went to the hospital and ate some medicine and snacks and slept for an hour.

>> Because I wasn\'t feeling well that time I didn\'t get a good score in our science class. After my class I went to the hospital and I ate some medicine and snacks.  I slept also for an hour.

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