Cats

2010-09-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jessica

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I really like cats. A stray cat or an own cat, I like both. The biggest reason that I like cats is a cat's lofty air. Unlike the dog, Most of the cat doesn't have a concept of master, so they aren't loyal but they are very cute. They always walk lightly and aren't profuse of their smile for everyone. Only some people who is selected by cats can see their smile. And the cat's eye is very profound and is shrouded in mystery. Also people's faces are devided into cat's physiognomy and dog's that. My girl friend is cat's physiognomy (She is excessively beautiful) so I guess I like cats better.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]…If I were to choose between a cat and a dog, I will choose dog. I also like cat but I prefer dog to take good care of. Yes, cats are also cute especially their eyes, it has different colors. But dogs can be trained to help in some ways.Hehehe!But maybe, yes I’ll try to take good care of cat too.See you , [이름]!     I really like cats. A stray cat or an own cat, I like both. >>>correct!!! The biggest reason that I like cats is a cat's lofty air. >>>The biggest reason that I like cats is because of its lofty hair. Unlike the dog, Most of the cat doesn't have a concept of master, so they aren't loyal but they are very cute. >>>Unlike the dog, most cats don’t have a concept of being a master so they aren’t loyal but they are very cute.  They always walk lightly and aren't profuse of their smile for everyone. >>>correct!!! Only some people who is selected by cats can see their smile. >>>Only some people who are selected by cats can see their smile. And the cat's eye is very profound and is shrouded in mystery. >>>correct!!! Also people's faces are devided into cat's physiognomy and dog's that. >>>Also people’s faces are divided into cat’s physiognomy and dogs too. My girl friend is cat's physiognomy (She is excessively beautiful) so I guess I like cats better. >>>correct!!!            

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