cause and effect
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Anchan,
All of these totally make sense to me.
This doesn\'t only applies to business or
money matters, rather, it stands true
to the realities of life in general. We were
designed to make choices. Therefore, the
choices we make, whether good or bad
determines the end-result for whatever
action we caused. :)
Teacher Sarah
Here is a cause and if condition is added,
it gives a birth of a result.
>> Here is a cause and if a condition is added, it gives birth to a result.
It\'s the law of Cause and effect , the law of fate.
>> CORRECT
Now the United States, China, Japan and Europe are increasing the money supply each other.
>> Today, the United States, China, Japan, and Europe are increasing their money supply.
So they are creating the cause of rising product prices and stock prices\'s bubbles.
>> In other words, they are creating the cause for rising product prices and stock prices\' bubbles.
and the other cause is here,
>> Here is the other cause,
That is increasing the money supply which is the recovery action.
>> It is the increasing money supply which is a recovery action.
In the future, the result of product price rising and stock price bubbles will be followed.
>> In the future, it is no doubt that high product prices and stock price bubbles will follow as a result.
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