celebration
학생이 쓴 원문
my son\'s name is jisu
he loves eating regardless of the kind
so we ate out somehow it just did not feel real
we were enjoyed
강사 첨삭
HAPPY NEW YEAR!
I\'m so happy for you and your family Mrs. [Name]!
This is a great ti[이름]g before the New Years.
Have a great celebration!
Thank you for doing your assignment for today.
I\'m looking forward to our next classes.
~Teacher Eve.
my son\'s name is jisu
>> Correct!
he loves eating regardless of the kind
>> He loves eating regardless of the kind of food.
so we ate out somehow it just did not feel real
>> So we ate out and somehow is just did not feel real.
we were enjoyed
>> We were overjoyed.
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