Celebrities who gamble

In today's class, you said to me that tomorrow we'll talk about celebrities who gamble. Therefore, I'd like to write about them in order to prepare the class and improve writing skill as well. Recently, Mr. [Name] who is one of the famous gagman in korea got caught by gambling. He went to gamble to the Philippines and lost big money in there. Moreover, at first he told a lie that he could't go back to korea because he was so sick. However, the truth is that he could't go back because he ran up a debt. According to some magazines, there were many korean celebraties with Shin in the gambling room. Personally, I had liked Mr.Shin but I disappointed with him. So many koreans did. I think gambling is not desirable. We shouldn't do that.

Hello there [이름]!!  Excellent performance in today's class by the way!  You're getting better with your speaking skills, just continue exerting more effort and know that I'm always here to help you. I'm looking forward for our class tomorrow and I'm so excited to talk to you again.  Have a restful evening! Good night! ~(>_<)~    Teacher Faye  In today's class, you said to me that tomorrow we'll talk about celebrities who gamble. >>  Correct.  OR >> In today뭩 class, you told me that tomorrow we뭠l be talking about celebrities who gamble.  Therefore, I'd like to write about them in order to prepare the class and improve writing skill as well.>> Therefore, I뭗 like to write about them in order to prepare for the class and improve on my writing skills as well.Recently, Mr. [Name] who is one of the famous gagman in korea got caught by gambling. >> Recently, Mr. [Name], who is one of the famous gagmans in Korea, was caught due to gambling. He went to gamble to the Philippines and lost big money in there. >> He went to the Philippines to gamble and unfortunately, he lost a lot of money. Moreover, at first he told a lie that he could't go back to korea because he was so sick. >> Moreover, he initially told a lie, saying he couldn뭪 go back to Korea because he was so sick. However, the truth is that he could't go back because he ran up a debt. >> However, the truth was that he couldn뭪 go back because he had debts he was running away from.  According to some magazines, there were many korean celebraties with Shin in the gambling room. >> According to some magazines, there were many Korean celebrities with Shin in the gambling room.Personally, I had liked Mr.Shin but I disappointed with him. >> Personally, I used to have a liking for Mr. [Name] but I was disappointed. OR >> Personally, I did like Mr. [Name]  before, but now I뭢 disappointed with him.  So many koreans did. >> Many Koreans got disappointed too. OR >> Many other Koreans were disappointed too.  I think gambling is not desirable. We shouldn't do that. >> I think gambling is undesirable, we should refrain from doing it.OR >> I think gambling is unacceptable, we shouldn뭪 do it.