cello lesson

i have a cello lesson once in a week. and that day is tuesday. every tuesday i meet my cello theacher at seven thirty. i like learning cello. first we say hi to each other, and then we do some scals. then we do a boos name string builder. then suziki. and affter that, we talk, and affter that we say good bye. and that is the end of my story today. THE END

Hello Ji[이름]! I think playing the cello is pretty cool. You must be awesome at it. Thanks for sharing about this. Kindly check my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ i have a cello lesson once in a week. >> I have a cello lesson once a week.  and that day is tuesday. >> It is every Tuesday. every tuesday i meet my cello theacher at seven thirty. >> Every Tuesday, I meet my cello teacher at 7:30.i like learning cello. >> I like learning the cello.first we say hi to each other, and then we do some scals. >> First, we say hi to each other and then we do some scales. then we do a boos name string builder. >> Then, we study a book named \"String Builder\". then suziki. >> Next, we study the book named \"Suzuki\".and affter that, we talk, and affter that we say good bye. >> After that, we just talk and finally, we say goodbye. and that is the end of my story today. >> That is the end of my story for today.THE END >> CORRECT!