Certain amount of time
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It is truly hard for me to stay calm and focused during conflicts rather than expressing anger.
>>Correct.
Being consumed with anger caused me to relieve stress immediately, so the results were not good, even negative.
>>Being consumed by anger provides immediate stress relief but often leads to negative outcomes.
After I\'ve experienced a lot of negative effects, I\'ve become focused on fact, not emotion and think about logical sentences to convey to others.
>>After experiencing the negative effects of this approach, I shifted my focus to facts rather than emotions, taking the time to think about logical sentences to convey my thoughts to others.
As having conversation after a certain amount of time affects positive effects not only me but also other people, we can fluently resolve conflcts.
>>Engaging in conversations after allowing for a certain amount of time has positive effects not only on me but also to other people as we give fluent resolutions to conflicts.
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