Challenge to the next generation.

2020-04-22 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

One of the most alarming challenges that future generations are likely to face is excessive surveillance on people\'s daily activities. Due to the disastrous impact caused by the COVID-19, many governments across the world have implemented draconian measures to halt the further spread of the virus without considering their possible implications for the years to come. Such measures are diverse, ranging from putting people in lockdown to forcing them to wear a wristband to check where they are in real time. Individuals are generally accepting those policies as an emergency, assuming that the government will withdraw restrictions when the crisis is over. The thing is it isn\'t always the case. Authorities might come up with an excuse such as preparing for the next pandemic in order to justify why people should comply to abnormal meausures which obviously are encroaching individual liberty. Then, this abnormality becomes new normal, leaving people under the extensive surveillance.

강사 첨삭

Hi Drexel! Thank you for investing a little of your time with your homework. I appreciate the effort!
Nice provoking thoughts you have here. I\'ll ponder more on this. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah

One of the most alarming challenges that future generations are likely to face is excessive surveillance on people\'s daily activities. 
>>CORRECT
Due to the disastrous impact caused by the COVID-19, many governments across the world have implemented draconian measures to halt the further spread of the virus without considering their possible implications for the years to come. 
>>CORRECT
Such measures are diverse, ranging from putting people in lockdown to forcing them to wear a wristband to check where they are in real time. 
>>CORRECT
Individuals are generally accepting those policies as an emergency, assuming that the government will withdraw restrictions when the crisis is over. 
>>CORRECT
The thing is it isn\'t always the case. 
>>CORRECT
Authorities might come up with an excuse such as preparing for the next pandemic in order to justify why people should comply to abnormal measures which obviously are encroaching individual liberty. 
>>CORRECT
Then, this abnormality becomes new normal, leaving people under the extensive surveillance.
>>CORRECT

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